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The morning greeted Logan with a renewed sense of excitement. After the previous day's success in crafting his slingshot, he was eager to test it further. Deciding to simplify his pouch, he left the fire bow with the Firekeeper, freeing space to store his slingshot and a collection of small rocks for ammunition. As the cn prepared for their daily journey, Logan began practicing his aim, targeting nearby trees.
Hitting rge objects like trees was easy, but smaller targets, such as individual leaves, proved far more difficult. Most of the time, his shots missed entirely. On rare occasions, a stone struck its mark, but Logan knew those hits were more luck than skill. Frustration crept in, but he pressed on, determined to improve.
Throughout the day, as his mother carried him through the jungle, Logan continued practicing. He focused on small animals like birds, but shooting from his mother's moving pace made aiming almost impossible. His stones flew wide, rarely even grazing his targets. Periodically, he replenished his stock of rocks, picking up smooth stones from the ground when the cn paused to forage.
Despite his efforts, Logan's day was marked by failure. By the time they reached their campsite for the night, he was in a sour mood, irritated with his ck of progress. Once the cn began setting up camp, Logan wandered a short distance from the adults to collect himself, though he stayed close enough to remain safe.
While staring into the forest, Logan noticed a medium-sized bird resting on a low branch. The bird seemed calm, oblivious to his presence. Logan's irritation gave way to focus. This was his chance. He crouched low, picked up a small stone, and readied his slingshot.
Unlike earlier, Logan now had the advantage of a stationary target and a stable stance. He took his time, adjusting his aim carefully. The tension in the tendon-string felt steady beneath his fingers. Finally, he released the stone.
The projectile flew true, striking the bird on the side of its head with a sharp crack. The bird fell from the branch, its limp body nding with a dull thud on the forest floor. Logan's heart raced with a mixture of triumph and disbelief—he had done it.
The chief, who had been observing Logan from a distance, approached as the boy stood frozen in pce. With a rge hand, he patted Logan's small shoulder, signaling him to stay put. The chief disappeared briefly into the trees, returning moments ter with the bird in hand, its neck clearly broken. He looked at the bird, then back at Logan, his expression a mixture of perplexity and curiosity.
Logan, now putting his slingshot away, extended his hands toward the bird, silently asking for it. The chief handed it over, and Logan dragged the bird to the fire, the weight of its body awkward in his small hands. The cn's eyes followed his every movement as he gestured to his mother for a pouch and a cutting stone.
Once equipped, Logan set to work. He plucked the bird meticulously, storing the feathers in the pouch for future use. His small hands struggled at times, but his determination drove him forward. After plucking, he used the sharp stone to slice open the bird's abdomen, removing its entrails piece by piece and tossing them into the fire. The fmes hissed and crackled as the remains burned, sending up small wisps of smoke.
Satisfied with his preparation, Logan enlisted his mother's help to gather rge, green leaves. He wrapped the bird in several yers, creating a protective cocoon to keep it from burning over direct fmes.
Logan cleared a section of the fire's embers, using a stick to push the glowing coals into a small pile. He arranged ft stones over the embers, creating a makeshift surface, and pced the wrapped bird on top. Throughout the process, he maintained the fire with the Firekeeper's assistance, ensuring the embers stayed hot without scorching the leaves too much.
As time passed, the meadow filled with the enticing aroma of roasting meat. The rich, savory smell wafted through the air, drawing curious gnces from the cn. Logan watched the bird carefully, turning it occasionally to ensure even cooking.
After what felt like hours, Logan judged the bird to be ready. He asked one of the men to pce a rge, ft stone near the fire, then rolled the bird onto it. Using a cutting stone, he carefully peeled back the now-charred leaves, revealing the cooked bird inside. Its golden-brown skin glistened slightly, and the sight reminded Logan of a roasted chicken from his previous life.
The cn stared in awe, the smell clearly awakening their hunger. Logan's pride swelled, but before he could take a bite, the chief stepped forward.
The chief made it clear with a few simple gestures: he would taste the bird first. He pointed to Logan, then to his stomach, indicating his concern for the boy's safety. If the bird caused illness, it would be better for him to endure it than the child.
Tearing off a small piece, the chief chewed slowly, his expression unreadable. After swallowing, he sat down beside the fire, instructing the others to resume their activities. They would wait and see if he had any adverse reaction.
Over the next hour and a half, the chief remained seated by the fire, his watchful eyes flicking between the bird and Logan. His rge, calloused hands rested on his knees as he sat in silence, his expression a mask of calm deliberation. Occasionally, he would gnce at the boy, who busied himself with small tasks to distract from the tension. Logan pretended not to notice, but inside, anticipation gnawed at him. Would the chief decre the bird safe to eat? Would his efforts be validated, or would they have to abandon the meal altogether?
Logan's mother sat nearby, her gentle presence grounding him. Though she said nothing, her eyes followed every movement of the chief, her posture slightly tense. She had watched Logan's careful preparation of the bird and trusted his instincts, but even she seemed to hold her breath as the chief deliberated.
The Firekeeper, seated closer to the fmes, watched Logan intently. Her admiration for the boy had grown ever since he had taught her how to make fire. To her, Logan wasn't just a child—he was a bringer of knowledge, someone who had changed her world in ways she hadn't imagined possible. She didn't speak, but her unwavering gaze was filled with pride and curiosity.
Finally, after what felt like an eternity, the chief rose from his seat. His towering frame cast long shadows across the fire as he turned to face the cn. He gestured with one rge hand, motioning for the others to approach. His expression was neutral but not grim, and Logan felt a flicker of hope.
The cn hesitated at first, their movements slow and cautious. Many of them had bad memories associated with eating meat—illnesses and discomfort caused by improperly prepared food. The unfamiliar smell of roasted bird hung in the air, mingling with the earthy aroma of the jungle, and it seemed to pull them forward despite their reservations.
Logan's mother was the first to step forward. She knelt by the fire, gently tearing off a small piece of the bird and handing it to Logan. Her face, usually calm and composed, held a hint of pride. "Here," her eyes seemed to say, "this is your moment."
Logan accepted the piece of meat and hesitated for a brief second, his mind racing with doubt. But as he bit into the tender flesh, all his concerns melted away. The meat was rich and fvorful, its texture soft yet satisfying. A wave of relief and satisfaction washed over him, and he couldn't stop a small smile from spreading across his face.
"It works," he thought, gncing at the others. "It's good."
Encouraged by Logan's reaction, the other adults began to take small portions of the bird. Their movements were tentative, their expressions wary. The first bites brought mixed reactions. Some coughed lightly, the taste and texture unfamiliar to them. Others chewed slowly, their brows furrowed in concentration as they adjusted to the new experience.
The Firekeeper was among the first to show true enthusiasm. She closed her eyes as she savored her portion, a soft hum of approval escaping her lips. When she looked at Logan, her admiration was pin to see. She said nothing, but her nod spoke volumes. To her, this wasn't just a meal—it was a testament to Logan's ability to lead and inspire change.
Gradually, the initial hesitation began to fade. The cn members, emboldened by the reactions of those around them, took rger bites. Quiet murmurs of approval spread through the group, accompanied by a growing sense of excitement. For the first time, they were tasting meat that didn't make them sick, meat that was properly cooked and safe to eat.
Logan sat by the fire, watching the scene unfold with a deep sense of fulfillment. His mother, sitting beside him, pced a gentle hand on his back, her pride unmistakable. Though the cn didn't use many words, their body nguage spoke volumes. Gratitude, curiosity, and even a touch of wonder filled their expressions as they enjoyed the meal.
The chief, who had been observing quietly, sat down beside Logan. He didn't say much, but his presence alone carried weight. When Logan looked up at him, the man met his gaze with a faint but approving smile. The chief reached out and ruffled Logan's hair—a gesture that had become his way of showing trust and acknowledgment.
Logan felt his chest swell with pride. He wasn't just surviving in this world—he was contributing, making it better for the people around him. But still, there was so much to teach, so much to learn. For now, surrounded by the warmth of the fire and the quiet sounds of the cn enjoying their meal, Logan allowed himself to rex.
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Time in the jungle passed in a rhythm of survival, each day blending into the next. For Logan, however, the passing months marked not just survival but a mission—one that would shape the cn's future. The ck of communication within the group had become a growing source of frustration. Words were scarce, and while gestures and tones carried the weight of most conversations, they were no substitute for true understanding. Logan decided to change that.
He began focusing heavily on teaching the cn to speak more effectively, starting with his mother. Their bond, strengthened by their time together, made her the ideal student—and teacher in return. Logan spent hours every day pointing to objects in their environment, repeating the words in clear, deliberate tones.
"This," Logan would say, holding up a rock. "Stone."
His mother, at first hesitant, would mimic his words: "S-tone."
When she stumbled, Logan corrected her patiently. Over time, her confidence grew, and the words began to stick.
As they worked together, Logan also learned from his mother. She would point to objects and say their names in their nguage, teaching him the words they already knew. Through these exchanges, Logan began to piece together more of their vocabury and the cultural meaning behind certain terms.
One word in particur stood out: Athan. His mother often said it while pointing at him, and others in the cn echoed it when referring to him. At first, Logan thought it was a term for his chest or a nickname tied to his age. But through careful observation and repeated questioning, he uncovered its true meaning.
It was his name.
The realization struck him deeply. "Athan" wasn't just a word—it was the name his mother and the chief, his father, had given him. It was their way of acknowledging him as part of the cn, as their child and as someone who belonged. For a moment, Logan felt a swell of emotion. In his previous life, he had always taken his name for granted. Now, hearing it spoken by his new family, it felt like a gift.
With this newfound connection, Logan redoubled his efforts. He wanted to give the cn the tools to communicate more clearly, to share ideas and thoughts that went beyond gestures and grunts. His mother was his first focus, but soon others began to show interest. The Firekeeper, often curious about Logan's activities, became his second student, followed by a few of the younger men and women.
Logan kept the lessons simple. He started with words for the basics of their world: trees, leaves, water, food, fire. Once those words were understood, he introduced actions like "run," "eat," "carry," and "build." Every evening by the fire, he would sit with the willing, using gestures and demonstrations to reinforce the new words.
The lessons weren't without challenges. Many in the cn struggled with pronunciation or were resistant to change. Logan quickly learned to adapt, simplifying his approach and breaking the words into smaller, manageable parts. He used repetition and patience, ensuring that no one felt embarrassed or overwhelmed.
His efforts began to pay off. Slowly but surely, the cn's communication improved. Sentences that had once been three or four words began to grow longer, more detailed. The conversations became more dynamic, filled with questions, observations, and even ughter. The adults started sharing ideas more freely, discussing pns for the next day or strategizing on how to avoid predators.
One evening, as the cn gathered around the fire, the chief approached Logan. His father was a man of few words, but that night he spoke in the clearest sentence Logan had ever heard from him: "You teach good. Make strong cn."
The words filled Logan with pride. He nodded, determined to keep pushing forward. He knew there was still a long way to go—years, perhaps—but every small step counted.
The newfound ability to communicate better began to transform the group. The Firekeeper used her words to expin how to care for embers and start fires more efficiently, saving time and resources.
For Logan, the improvement in communication wasn't just about efficiency; it was about connection. The more they could talk to each other, the more they could share their thoughts, dreams, and emotions. It was a step toward understanding each other not just as members of a cn, but as individuals.
Logan knew the journey wasn't over. There were still many words to learn, many ideas to share. But the progress they had made in just a few months gave him hope. Language wasn't just a tool for survival—it was a bridge to something greater.
Over the months, "Athan" had grown into his role as a vital part of the cn. His sling had become a reliable tool, and with increasing practice, he was able to bring down small birds regurly. At first, the cn was hesitant to embrace this new addition to their diet. The taste of cooked meat was unfamiliar, and memories of sickness from eating it raw lingered in their minds. But as time passed, their hesitance gave way to cautious enjoyment, and eventually, even anticipation. Meat became a welcomed part of their meals, and Logan took quiet pride in watching the cn's appreciation grow.
As their understanding of nguage progressed, so did Logan's ability to learn from the cn. While they were new to the idea of eating meat regurly, their knowledge of the jungle's fauna was vast. The adults spoke of animals Logan had never seen, describing their habits, tracks, and behaviors in growing detail. Some creatures roamed the dense jungle, while others were glimpsed in what appeared to be open prairies beyond their usual range. Logan listened carefully, piecing together patterns and ideas about how to approach different animals.
Logan's success with the fire bow had sparked an idea: if the cn could learn to make strong rope like the one he had used, they could create more advanced tools for hunting. Using the same method he had employed with his mother and the Firekeeper, Logan began teaching the cn how to weave vines into sturdy ropes.
It wasn't easy. Many of the adults struggled with the technique at first, their fingers clumsy and unused to the fine manipution required. Logan demonstrated patiently, repeating the process until they began to get the hang of it. Over time, their work improved, and soon the cn had a supply of durable ropes.
With the ropes complete, Logan introduced his next project: the bos. He expined the concept as simply as he could, miming the motion of throwing and describing how the weights would entangle a target's legs, causing it to trip. He crafted the first bos himself, tying smooth, round stones to the ends of a braided rope. After testing it on a nearby tree, Logan handed it to one of the men, encouraging him to try.
The man was hesitant at first, but after a few attempts, he managed to get the bos to spin properly before unching it. The rope wrapped neatly around a low branch, and the man's face lit up with excitement. Soon, others were practicing, their growing proficiency promising a new way to hunt rger game.
Next, Logan turned his attention to another essential weapon: spears. The cn already used simple wooden sticks for various tasks, but Logan wanted to make them more effective for hunting. He showed the group how to shape the tips into sharp points, then harden them by charring them over a fire. The heat-tempered wood became tougher and less likely to splinter upon impact.
The cn quickly embraced the idea, and soon, nearly every adult had a spear with a hardened tip. Logan encouraged them to practice using their new weapons, demonstrating how to thrust and practice throwing to increase accuracy, even to his small frame did not permit using the true weapons. While the results were mixed at first, the group improved steadily, their movements becoming more confident and precise over the span of time.
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After the success of the bos and the hardened spears, Logan—Athan—found himself thinking about the cn's future in a broader sense. The tools he had introduced were improving their ability to hunt and defend themselves, but they were still living a precarious existence. Each day was a struggle to find food and water, and the constant movement through the jungle was taking its toll.
Logan's thoughts often drifted to the two failed births the cn had endured. He hadn't been old enough to understand all the details at the time, but the grief and exhaustion etched into the parents' faces were unforgettable. Now, as he observed the group's struggles, he believed he had found the root of the problem.
The constant traveling through the dense jungle was hard on everyone, but especially on pregnant women. Logan had seen how the mothers-to-be were forced to keep up with the relentless pace, carrying loads and facing the same dangers as everyone else. The ck of rest, combined with inconsistent access to food and water, left their bodies too weak to support their pregnancies.
"It's no wonder the births failed," Logan thought. "How could an unborn child survive in these conditions when even the strongest adults struggle?"
The realization struck him deeply. If the cn didn't change its way of life, it would continue to lose its future. Something had to be done.
Logan began to develop an idea that seemed almost impossible in their current situation: settling down. The concept of a permanent home was alien to the cn, whose lives had always revolved around constant movement. But Logan was determined. He believed that if they could find a safe, resource-rich location, they could build a stable life—one where mothers could rest, children could thrive, and the group as a whole could prosper.
The more he thought about it, the clearer his vision became. A settlement would provide more than just shelter. It would offer security, a steady supply of food and water, and a foundation for the cn to grow stronger.
During their daily marches, Logan began paying closer attention to the terrain. He memorized the locations of streams, fruit-bearing trees, and areas with fertile soil. Whenever they passed through a meadow or a clearing, he evaluated it with new eyes, considering its potential as a future home.
One evening, as the cn settled by the fire, Logan—Athan—sat beside his mother, carefully inspecting the seeds he had gathered during the day. He turned them over in his small hands, feeling the smooth and rough textures of their shells. His mother, noticing his focused expression, leaned closer, curiosity flickering in her dark eyes.
She gestured toward the seeds, her brow furrowed. "Athan… why?" she asked, her voice hesitant but clear.
Logan looked up, surprised and pleased by her question. Her vocabury had improved considerably over the past months, and it was moments like this that made him feel his efforts were truly making a difference.
He held up a seed between his fingers, pointing to it and then to the ground. "Seed. Pnt here." He mimed digging a hole and pcing the seed inside, then gestured with his hand as if a pnt were growing.
His mother tilted her head, her expression a mix of intrigue and doubt. "Grow? Eat?"
Logan nodded eagerly, repeating, "Yes, grow. Eat." He reached for a piece of fruit they had collected earlier, holding it up as an example. "Fruit. Seed." He pointed to the seeds in the fruit and then back to the ones he had collected. "We put in ground. Wait. Grow more fruit."
Her eyes widened slightly as the idea began to take root. "More… food?"
"Yes!" Logan said, his voice tinged with excitement. "More food. Same pce. No move."
At this, her expression shifted to one of hesitation. She pointed into the distance, mimicking the cn's usual motion of traveling through the jungle. "But… move. Danger."
Logan understood her concern. The jungle was full of threats, and staying in one pce felt counterintuitive to their way of life. But he was prepared to expin. Picking up a small stick, he began to draw in the dirt, sketching out a simple scene. He drew a tree near a stream, marking it with lines for water. Around the tree, he added small circles to represent pnts.
He pointed to the tree. "Here. Safe. Water." He tapped the ground around it. "Food. Stay."
His mother studied the drawing intently. "Stay? No… move?"
"Stay," Logan repeated firmly. "Rest. Safe for baby." He paused, searching her face to see if she understood. "No tired. No hungry."
Her eyes softened at the mention of babies. The losses the cn had suffered were still fresh in her memory, and the idea of giving future mothers and children a better chance resonated deeply. She pointed to her belly, mimicking pregnancy, and then made a walking motion with her fingers. "Move… hard. Baby…" She frowned, finishing her thought with a simple, "Gone."
Logan nodded solemnly. "Yes. Gone. But if stay…" He tapped the drawing again. "Baby rest. Mother rest. Strong."
Her gaze shifted between Logan and the drawing, the weight of his words settling in. "Safe," she said quietly, as if testing the idea on her tongue.
"Safe," Logan echoed, offering her a small, encouraging smile. "We make safe."
She was silent for a long moment, her eyes fixed on the dirt drawing. Finally, she nodded, her hesitation giving way to a glimmer of hope. "I help."
Logan's heart swelled with relief and gratitude. "Thank you," he said softly, taking her hand in his. "We do this together."