The air thickens with smoke, a suffocating blanket that stings Takeshi's eyes and burns his lungs. Through the haze, shadows dance—soldiers clashing, bodies falling. Metal scrapes against metal. Men scream. The wounded moan. A woman wails for her child.
Takeshi stands amid the chaos, unmoved by the symphony of suffering around him. The city of Shenfeng burns, its wooden structures crumbling to ash, stone buildings blackened by soot. What was once a thriving trade center now resembles the maw of some ancient beast, devouring all within its reach. Flames lick at the sky, painting it crimson against the setting sun.
The Crimson Blade glows in Takeshi's hand, humming with anticipation. Fire coils around the steel like a living thing, eager to taste more blood. His other hand extends, and from it springs a whip of pure flame, six feet of concentrated destruction that sears the air itself.
A squadron of soldiers charges toward him, their faces twisted with determination and fear. Takeshi moves without hesitation, without thought. His blade severs limbs. His whip burns through armor and flesh alike. He is not a man but an instrument of war, each movement precise, calculated, efficient.
"Please! We surrender!" A soldier drops his weapon, falls to his knees.
Takeshi's blade finds the man's throat. There is no room for mercy in this campaign.
He advances through the burning streets, stepping over corpses without seeing them. A child darts across his path, eyes wide with terror. A woman clutches an infant to her breast, backing away from the flames consuming her home. An old man kneels beside the body of his son, too grief-stricken to flee.
Takeshi registers these moments with detached curiosity. They are not people to him—cannot be people, not here amid the slaughter, not now when weakness means failure. They are merely obstacles, collateral damage in service to a greater purpose that justifies any action. The screams fade into background noise as his consciousness narrows to the task at hand. The Dao of Fire responds to his indifference, feeding on his emotional void, growing stronger with each life extinguished, each building razed. In war, compassion is a luxury he cannot afford, a weight that would drag him into hesitation when decisiveness is required. The flames coiling around his blade burn brighter, hungrier, sensing his resolve hardening into something beyond human feeling—something that can carry out orders without flinching, without questioning.
"The eastern quarter is secured, Commander." A lieutenant approaches, his armor splattered with blood. "The remaining civilians are being gathered in the temple square."
Takeshi nods.
Hours later, when the fighting subsides, Takeshi walks alone through what remains of Shenfeng. His boots crush charred bones that crumble to dust beneath each measured step. The air reeks of cooked flesh and scorched hair, a nauseating perfume that clings to his nostrils and settles in his lungs. Ash drifts like gray snow, coating his shoulders and hair, turning the world monochrome. Buildings that once housed families, businesses, dreams—all reduced to skeletal frames and smoldering debris. The wind carries embers past his face, tiny dying stars that mirror the fading light in countless eyes he has extinguished today..
In the temple square, bodies lie piled upon bodies. Some tried to flee. Others huddled together in their final moments. Children cling to mothers. Husbands shield wives. All for nothing.
Takeshi stands among them, his shadow stretching long across the ashes. Something stirs within him—a flicker of emotion breaking through the carefully constructed walls of his discipline. He looks at his hands, still gripping his weapons, and for the first time sees not tools of war but instruments of atrocity.
A small, blackened object catches his eye. He bends to retrieve it—a child's doll, its painted face half-melted, glass eyes staring accusingly up at him.
Takeshi gasps awake, his body drenched in sweat despite the cool night air. His heart hammers against his ribs like a prisoner desperate for escape. The room around him—simple, sparse, unfamiliar—slowly comes into focus. His room in the Feng estate.
Not Shenfeng. Not twenty years ago.
He sits up, pressing the heels of his palms against his eyes, trying to drive away images that have haunted him for decades. The screams fade, replaced by the gentle chirping of crickets outside his window and the distant sounds of the village beginning its day.
His hands tremble. They always do after these dreams. Steady enough to kill, yet they shake when confronted with memory. Twenty years of violence etched into muscle and bone, and still his body betrays him in these quiet moments. It matters not that this particular nightmare held fragments of invention—he has committed enough genuine violence that the distinction blurs. Reality and nightmare have become interchangeable, equally capable of haunting him. The blood he's spilled could flood the rivers of three provinces. His sword has carved through flesh and bone with the same efficiency as a farmer's scythe through wheat, and with similar detachment. In the cold light of dawn, that efficiency feels less like skill and more like damnation.
"Duty," he whispers to the empty room. The word that justified everything. Duty to his lord, to his comrades, to the unification that would bring peace. How many had died for that peace? How many had he killed?
The Crimson Blade rests against the wall, dormant now but still bearing witness to all the lives it has taken. Sometimes Takeshi thinks he can hear them—the voices of the dead, trapped within the steel, crying out for justice or mercy or simple recognition.
He rises and drifts to the window. Dawn breaks over Yuanxin, gilding the horizon in gold and pink. Peaceful. Untouched by war. The world they fought to create. Yet as Takeshi surveys the awakening city, doubt seeps in like morning mist. The enemy had cherished families too, homes they defended, dawns they treasured—hadn't they bled for this same tranquility? These golden mornings, this right to live? The bitter irony consumes him—that both sides butchered each other for identical visions of peace, each believing their path alone led to salvation.
For ten years, this question has haunted him, whispering in his quietest moments, invading his dreams. The answer remains elusive. Perhaps it lies with the dead, their ashes scattered to the winds, or among the bleached bones of countless fallen, their final moments seared into his memory. Blood stains his hands—hands that once justified their actions through necessity and war's cruel calculations. They tremble in the dawn light, heavy with the weight of lives taken and futures erased. The burden never lightens.
His gaze drifts toward the Feng training compound, the image of the girl – Lian – momentarily surfacing. Her fierce determination, her raw connection to the wind... so different from the path he walked. Yet in that difference, he recognized a reflection—two souls constrained by obligation, merely from opposite directions. While he remained shackled to duties fulfilled and blood already spilled, she struggled against the chains of expectations not yet met, a future prescribed rather than chosen. Both trapped—he by memories that wouldn't release their grip, she by traditions that refused to bend. Both weight pressing in from all sides inescapable.
Then, cutting through the turmoil, came the only answer he had ever known, the same stark truth he offered Lian. Train. Control what you can control. He pushed away from the window, the ghosts momentarily held at bay by the familiar pull of discipline. There was only the dawn, the forms, and the endless effort to keep the foundations strong against the weight of what he carried. He turned towards the courtyard.
* * *
The thin sleeping robe clung to him, damp with the cold sweat of remembered terror. The phantom screams and the scent of burning flesh still clinging stubbornly to the edges of his awareness. He moved with ingrained precision, splashing cool water onto his face from the basin, the brief shock a welcome anchor to the present moment. Dressing in his practice gi felt automatic, each fold and tie a familiar ritual performed countless times across decades of war and uneasy peace. Yet, the ghosts of his past refused to fade entirely with the night. He needed the stark clarity of the training yard, the familiar burn in his muscles, to truly chase them away.
He moved through the sleeping estate, his footsteps soft on the cool stone floors. The corridors were still deep in shadow, the air holding the chill of the departing night. At this pre-dawn hour, the sprawling residence felt cavernous and empty, the silence broken only by the occasional creak of aged wood settling. Perhaps somewhere in the distant kitchens, the earliest servants were beginning their day, but here, near the family quarters and training grounds, only his own quiet passage disturbed the peace. He preferred it this way, the solitude matching the stillness he sought within himself before facing the rising sun.
Takeshi rounds the corner toward the training courtyard, his breathing finally settling into a controlled pattern. He has nearly banished the tremor from his hands. Nearly. But something tugs at his awareness before he reaches his destination—a subtle disturbance in the morning quiet, a ripple in the ambient qi that his heightened senses detect without conscious effort. Twenty years of battlefield vigilance have honed this perception to instinct; at the peak of Core Formation, such awareness comes as naturally as breathing.
He slows his approach, extending his senses outward. Someone has preceded him to the training grounds—someone whose presence carries the unrefined signature of early cultivation. When he finally reaches the courtyard entrance, he stops abruptly, a frown creasing his weathered face.
Lian stands in the center of the yard, her back to him, her posture rigid with determination. Her injured wrist is bound tightly with white bandages that glow faintly in the pre-dawn light. She shouldn't be here. She should be in bed, recovering from both physical and mental wounds. The healer had been explicit about rest.
Takeshi melts back into the shadows beneath the covered walkway, his presence masked by instinct and years of battlefield stealth. He draws his qi inward, compressing it until it becomes a dense, quiet ember at his core—a technique perfected during countless night operations when even the faintest spiritual signature could mean detection and death. His body relaxes into perfect stillness, breathing slowing to near imperceptibility. The darkness embraces him like an old friend, rendering him all but invisible to anyone without extraordinary sensory cultivation.
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Lian attempts to move through what appears to be the first sequence of the Five Foundation Forms, but her movements are halting, compromised by her injury. Each time she extends her arm, pain flashes across her face. Yet she persists, starting over whenever her form falters.
The stubborn determination is familiar to Takeshi. How many times had he trained through injuries during the war? How many times had he pushed his body past reasonable limits, knowing that to falter meant death—not just his own, but those of his comrades?
But this isn't war. This is a girl who yesterday witnessed death for the first time, who vomited at the sight of real violence, who learned the harsh difference between play practice and combat.
Lian attempts a sweeping motion that requires both hands, winces visibly, and drops to one knee. Her uninjured hand balls into a fist that strikes the packed earth of the courtyard. Her shoulders shake—whether from pain, frustration, or delayed shock, Takeshi cannot tell.
He should leave. This moment isn't meant for his eyes. Yet he remains, watching as Lian drags herself back to her feet. There's something raw and honest in her struggle that resonates with him, cutting through layers of detachment he's cultivated over years.
She tries again. The same form. The same failure. This time when she falls, she stays down longer, her breathing ragged. When she rises, her face is wet with tears she angrily wipes away.
Lian's third attempt reveals the same flaws Takeshi has noticed since first observing her technique—weight distributed incorrectly, shoulders tensed where they should be relaxed, breath held when it should flow. He recognizes the pattern of someone who has spent years practicing incorrectly, building muscle memory that now works against her. Each movement carries the echo of improperly transmitted knowledge, or from Lian's own stubborn insistence on adapting techniques before understanding their foundation. The girl has constructed her own prison of habit, one that will require painful unlearning before true progress can begin. Even now, as she compensates for her injury, she reinforces these flawed patterns rather than using this opportunity to rebuild from first principles.
"Again," she whispers to herself, the word carrying across the empty courtyard.
Something shifts in Takeshi's chest—recognition, perhaps. Not of the girl's technique, which remains flawed and undisciplined, but of the spirit behind it. How many times had he whispered that same word to himself? On battlefields soaked with blood and rain. In training yards at dawn. In the aftermath of nightmares that left him hollow.
Again. The simplest of words. The hardest of commitments.
Lian moves to try again, her body flowing more naturally now that she's adapted to her limitation. The connection to her nascent Dao of Wind shows in moments of grace that punctuate otherwise awkward transitions, but still, she allows it to lead her astray. Raw talent without proper foundation—just as he'd told her before. Talent without discipline was merely potential waiting to be crushed.
She halts mid-motion, frustration giving way to something deeper. Her chest rises and falls with deliberate breaths as she centers herself. When she reopens her eyes, Takeshi sees a fundamental shift in her demeanor—the reckoning of someone who has finally confronted the gap between illusion and reality. The bandits had stripped away her pretensions, leaving behind a student truly ready to learn.
Takeshi feels an unexpected tug of responsibility. He has seen this moment before in young recruits who survived their first real battle—that precious window when the mind is most receptive to correction, when old habits might be unlearned before they calcify further.
He will not teach her. He has said as much. But perhaps she can watch...
His feet carry him forward before his mind fully commits. The courtyard stones are cool beneath his bare feet as he emerges from the shadows. Lian's eyes widen, her body tensing as if preparing for rebuke. Instead, Takeshi moves past her without acknowledgment, finding a clear space several paces away.
There, he assumes the opening stance of the First Foundation Form. His movements are glacial, each minute adjustment visible as he shifts his weight with exaggerated precision. His breathing becomes deliberately audible—the cornerstone of proper qi cultivation. Each position is held for seconds longer than necessary, allowing the stance to reveal its purpose, its balance points, its structural integrity.
Upon completion, he returns to the starting position with the same methodical care. Then, and only then, does he turn his head slightly, eyes meeting Lian's over his shoulder. No command. No explanation. Simply an opportunity presented.
Understanding blooms across her face. She hurries to position herself behind him, adjusting her stance to mirror his. Her injured arm trembles slightly, but her expression shows nothing but concentration.
As Takeshi begins the sequence again, he senses her following—not perfectly, but with a humility and attention he hasn't seen from her before. In the quiet of the courtyard as the sun rises over the outer walls, they move together through the ancient forms, their breaths gradually synchronizing in the cool morning air.
* * *
Takeshi guides Lian through the forms with methodical precision. Each movement is deliberately slowed, stripped to its essence. He maintains a deliberate silence, offering correction only through patient stillness. When her form falters, he simply pauses in the demonstration, holding the correct position with unwavering discipline until Lian recognizes her error and adjusts herself. His teaching speaks through the absence of movement rather than words or touch.
Speaking would transform this morning exercise into something formal, an acknowledgment of a teacher-student relationship he has not agreed to. Words would only cloud what the body must learn directly—the weight transfer that generates power, the breath control that sustains movement, the center line that governs balance. He demonstrates each position with the economical grace that a lifetime of practice and twenty years of war had refined to instinct, watching as she struggles to mirror him. Not instruction, he tells himself. Merely demonstration.
He notices how quickly Lian adapts. Despite her injury, she mirrors his movements with growing accuracy. The flaws remain—years of incorrect practice cannot be undone in a single morning—but he sees small adjustments forming. Her breathing steadies. Her shoulders drop slightly. Her stance widens to find proper balance.
The sun climbs higher, painting the courtyard in golden light. Sweat beads on both their brows, but neither acknowledges fatigue. They move through the Second Foundation Form, then the Third. Takeshi maintains the same exacting pace, refusing to advance until each position is properly executed.
He senses her frustration at times—brief flashes of impatience when a transition proves difficult with her injured wrist—but she suppresses it, following his lead without complaint. This, more than anything, confirms his earlier assessment: the girl is finally ready to learn.
They continue for what seems like hours, the morning sun climbing steadily higher as they work through form after form. Takeshi leads her through the Fifth Foundation Form, watching as Lian's movements become more fluid despite her injury. When they complete the sequence, he simply returns to the beginning stance of the First Form, starting the cycle anew. He can see the momentary question in her eyes—a silent inquiry about when they might advance—but it vanishes as quickly as it appears, replaced by renewed concentration.
Three complete cycles they completed, then a fourth. Each repetition revealing subtle improvements in her technique. The bandaged wrist trembles occasionally, but she continues without vocal complaint.
"What exactly is happening here?"
The voice cuts through their concentration. Lady Feng stands at the courtyard entrance, her expression a careful mask of polite inquiry that doesn't quite hide her concern. Beside her stands a tall, thin man in the formal robes of a magistrate, his shrewd eyes taking in the scene with practiced assessment.
Takeshi completes his current movement before acknowledging them with a respectful nod. "Morning practice, Lady Feng."
Lian straightens, her face flushing. "Mother, I—"
"Should be resting that wrist," Lady Feng interrupts, approaching with measured steps. She examines her daughter's bandaged arm with a frown. "The physician was quite clear about this."
"It doesn't hurt much," Lian protests, though Takeshi has noticed her wincing throughout their practice.
Lady Feng sighs, then turns to Takeshi. "Master Arashi, while I appreciate your... attention to my daughter's training, perhaps there are more suitable activities given her condition."
Takeshi inclines his head slightly.
The magistrate steps forward, his official insignia catching the sunlight. "Lady Feng, perhaps I might have a word with Master Arashi while you attend to your daughter?"
Lady Feng nods, then places a firm hand on Lian's shoulder. "Come, Lianhua. Master Han has arranged for an etiquette instructor to begin preparations for Lord Wei's visit. She arrives this morning."
Lian's face falls. "But Mother—"
"This is not negotiable," Lady Feng says, her tone gentle but unyielding. "The Provincial Lord's son will be evaluating you in less than two months. Every aspect of your presentation must be perfect."
Takeshi watches the familiar conflict play across Lian's face—rebellion warring with resignation. For a moment, her eyes meet his, seeking something—permission to resist, perhaps, or acknowledgment of the unfairness. He offers neither, his expression remaining neutral.
"Yes, Mother," Lian finally says, bowing her head.
As Lady Feng leads her daughter away, Lian glances back once. Takeshi gives her the barest nod—a silent thank you for the morning workout.
The magistrate clears his throat once they're alone. "Master Arashi, I am Magistrate Wu. I've been meaning to speak with you since your... incident at the river crossing."
Takeshi wipes sweat from his brow with a cloth. "What can I do for you, Magistrate?"
"Five dead bandits, including Hu Wuji himself," Magistrate Wu says, watching Takeshi's reaction carefully. "A Core Formation cultivator and four of his men, dispatched in less than a minute, according to Lord Feng's account of his daughter's testimony."
"The girl was in danger," Takeshi replies simply.
"Indeed." The magistrate clasps his hands behind his back. "I've reviewed the scene myself. Your reputation appears well-earned, Crimson Storm."
Takeshi's jaw tightens at the name. "I did what was necessary." The title—Crimson Storm—hangs between them like an unwelcome ghost. Twenty years of battlefields condensed into two words that follow him regardless of distance traveled or time passed.
"I prefer simply Takeshi," he says after a measured pause, his voice level despite the familiar discomfort. "That other name belongs to a different time." He meets the magistrate's gaze directly, neither challenging nor submissive, merely establishing a boundary that he hopes will be respected. The old battlefield title carries too many memories, too much blood—a reminder of everything he's tried to leave behind since the wars ended.
"Of course." Magistrate Wu's expression softens slightly. "And the Empire thanks you for it. Hu Wuji has been terrorizing travelers along that road for months. We've had multiple disappearances, particularly of young women."
"Then perhaps you should have addressed the problem sooner," Takeshi says, his voice neutral despite the implied criticism.
The magistrate doesn't rise to the bait. Instead, he reaches into his robes and produces a sizeable cloth pouch that lands with a heavy clink when he places it on a nearby stone bench.
"The Imperial bounty for Hu Wuji was substantial. Five hundred silver taels, to be precise. The additional men add another hundred."
Takeshi glances at the pouch without moving to take it. "I didn't kill them for money."
"Nevertheless, the reward is yours by right." The magistrate pushes the pouch toward him. "Consider it the Empire's gratitude for removing a significant threat."
After a moment's hesitation, Takeshi accepts the pouch, securing it within his robes. "Is that all, Magistrate?"
"Not quite." Magistrate Wu's expression grows serious. "Hu Wuji wasn't operating independently. He served as a lieutenant to the warlord Black Fang Kang, who controls much of the banditry in this region."
Takeshi's eyes narrow slightly. "You're concerned about retaliation."
"It's a possibility we must consider. Black Fang doesn't tolerate challenges to his authority, and the death of a Core Formation lieutenant represents a significant loss." The magistrate studies Takeshi. "I understand you're employed by the Feng family to protect their daughter."
"I am."
"Then I suggest you remain particularly vigilant in the coming weeks. Black Fang's methods are... vindictive. He may target the Feng girl specifically if he learns of her connection to Hu Wuji's death."
He accepted the magistrate's caution with grave solemnity, inclining his head respectfully. Though his expression remained impassive, his mind was already calculating new protective measures for Lian should the bandits seek retribution through her. The thought that she might face danger because of his actions made something cold settle in his chest, his jaw tightening almost imperceptibly. Whatever came, he would ensure no harm befell her—he would heighten his vigilance and eliminate any threat before it reached her doorstep.
Takeshi looks toward the wing where Lian has disappeared with her mother, a new resolve settling over him. The girl would need more than etiquette lessons to survive what might be coming.