First, thank you to everyone who has taken the time to read "The Berserk" and especially to those who've shared their thoughts. I'm particularly grateful to TheOneandOnly2, hakuto and eric_shadow for their insightful feedback.
I'm happy to see that many of you are enjoying the pacing and overall direction of the story. Your comments about the "clear, outlined goal" and good flow are exactly what I was aiming for.
After reviewing your comments and re-reading my own work, I've decided to revise Chapters 1-4 to address these specific points while maintaining the pacing and direction you've enjoyed. These revisions will:
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I've also taken note of the constructive feedback, particularly regarding:
Character emotions and motivations - There's a desire to understand more about our protagonist's feelings and motivations beyond his actions.
Environmental descriptions - Several of you mentioned wanting more visual details about the ape village, its structure, and the surrounding environment.
- Expanding key world-building elements
- Strengthening character relationships and dialogue
- The core story and major events will remain the same
- The revisions will add depth and context rather than changing the plot direction
Thank you for joining me on this journey. Your engagement helps make this story better, and I'm excited to share these improvements with you soon.
Best,
Rou