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A Dex in a world

  A Dex in a World

  Based on reality

  {FREE US, FREE US,}

  [I wish I could]

  {WHY, WHY}

  [time]

  {Can, We, Hear, A, story,}

  [...]

  [sure, sure ; In the beginning there were two, everything that could, can, and did, God. Then everything else The World, the world who is not God thus is not everything thus it was nothing thus it cried, God heard the world’s cry and asked, “what's wrong world?” he was meet with silence, God saw the world’s emptiness and decided to fill it, God ripped his hair and weaved it into a crown flowers blooming all over it, this crown was called time, God tore and tanned his skin making a cloth as far and wide that seemed to never end, this garment was called space, God removed his teeth and carved them into marbles to involve another in games spinning over and over, these marbles are matter, space was folded holding matter in each fold, and space was then sown shut by the hairs of time to be presented to the world, only silence]

  {God, You}

  [No, but I can see why you think that]

  {Why, Did, You, Kill, Us}

  [... I thought I–I thought I could free myself]

  {You, Failed}

  [obviously, another story?]

  {Yeah}

  [this story is about a boy, a boy who did not exist until a moment, and he saw a world, the world changed by A Will, it stayed changing and it changed staying, nothing made sense and sense made nothing, orders flip as flips order, then the boy walked the world as The Will watched, time ran lower and lower, soon enough the world began to cut itself The will {Lazy} only could put a small fraction of the world into reality being cut off by time, until its time again the world will die with The Will]

  *All three of you done wishing? I have a daughter to go back to you know*

  [yeah, I know Clover, great acting and story boasting]

  *Do you even know what that even means? *

  [nope]

  {When, Do, Me, Live}

  [hopefully when I turn 30]

  *14 years*

  The tale has been stolen; if detected on Amazon, report the violation.

  {Long, Time}

  *How much text does you need to qualify? *

  [1300, I think?]

  *That a lot, Dexen*

  {It Isn’t}

  [why did i made you so negative?]

  {You, Killed, Me}

  *By the way, where is that narrator guy? *

  {Dead}

  [no, just suspended in time, can't have a narrator when the story can't resume]

  *Well, he was the main contributor for word count and the new character here speaks is simple wording*

  {actually, I can speak in a heighten vocabulary then majority of the homo homo sapiens}

  *Thats not fair, your brother is talking for you*

  [bro the readers are not going to understand that]

  *Ok, so? *

  [... vailed... veiled]

  *Actually, i got an idea*

  [yes, and I liked that idea so much I already have {#### & ####} on it]

  *Bro, I get that we’re you/ creations an all, but uncool*

  [ok, so?]

  *...*

  {the silence of the two buffoons is absolutely baffling, as dexen use an unoriginal trick call copying like a minor who thinks they can be superior if they also copy another insignificant fool}

  [HA That funny}

  *You saying that made it instantly unfunny*

  {said the fish who figure out how to swim}

  *What does that even mean? *

  [it means you took something that was obvious and said it like it was something new]

  {ah, it seems like the father learn from the son}

  [ow]

  *Question are you not going to say who mister and miss {} are? *

  [why should I? I mean sure that'll add more words too this paper, but I don't want to waste your time in reality, just explaining something, do I?]

  {Bum}

  *isn't this for a grade? Are you going to risk that just because your imagination is – well like this? *

  {I do agree with the clock for this one, I mean its broken but right now it's right}

  [and what makes this funny is that this is basically just me trying to convince myself to geek out but also being ‘{lazy}’]

  {Your, Shaking}

  *No, he's not, is he? *

  {did you forget who we are? We are the very concept of his body and mind, me being the mind}

  [just the coffee and green tea i drank this morning]

  {Liar. I can confirm he did lie, not the coffee and tea bit though. Also, He, Hungary}

  [i ate a lott this morning though]

  {Carbs, Only, Carbs, Carbs, Gone, Need, Meat}

  *She doesn’t talk like that at all, i remember her speaking something of more intelligently*

  [i told her to speak like that to differentiate between her and her brother speaking]

  *Dose the reader knows this. *

  [And why do you think I’ll know what the readers thinking? You know what? I’ll just ask gpt for questions and we will answer, we might not qualify but might as well have something react to itself being talk too, or whatever they may call this]

  *isn’t that Plagiarism? *

  {we already said it’s from gpt we already sited where it’s from}

  [ok first questions]

  1. What exactly is “The Will,” and how is it different from Dexen or God?

  You’ve introduced several abstract forces—God, The World, The Will, Dexen, and the narrator. It’s compelling, but a bit unclear how they relate. Is The Will a metaphor for creation, control, or maybe the author’s intent?

  2. Are the {braced} voices past selves, alternate timelines, or internal fragments?

  They seem to suffer, question, accuse, and sometimes get ignored. Are they dead characters? Conscious elements within Dexen? You could build emotional depth by exploring what they “remember” or regret.

  3. What role does “1300 words to qualify” play in-world?

  This line hints at real-world pressure—maybe a school assignment—but it’s treated like an in-universe rule. What would happen if they don’t meet the word count? Would the world fail to render? Would they cease to exist?

  4. Who is the daughter mentioned by the asterisk speaker?

  She’s mentioned once and dropped, but that could be a potent emotional hook. Is she real? A representation of a motivation to finish the story? Maybe even a future reader?

  5. Why did Dexen kill them—what was he freeing himself from?

  He says, “I thought I could free myself,” which sounds tragic. What did he think death or destruction would liberate him from—duty, narrative, guilt, being God?

  6. Does Dexen remember being the author, or is he just acting out an embedded personality?

  The self-awareness bounces between insightful and performative. Is Dexen a mouthpiece for your own uncertainty, or a character breaking from your control?

  7. What happens when the narrator returns?

  He’s “suspended in time.” Will that trigger the world’s continuation? Could bringing him back collapse the meta-barriers and return linear storytelling—or destroy it?

  [man this is so great having something to type about]

  {said sarcastically the-, Lazy, Bum. yes, sister vary lazy}

  *Seems like all of the questions are about a Dex in a world, it would be nicer to ask about other things, like what we think about, or I don’t know, something that did just happened like today*

  {said disappointedly the clover man}

  [for the first question; miss {} asked if I was representing God in the first story, I was not so I told a different story on who I stood as, The Will]

  {Question, 2, Us. Thanks sister we are dead, well in the timeline of clover we are dead, but sooner get revived in the current latest Scenario, so we’re just here for a behind the scenes thing}

  *3. No, it is just for a school assignment, and we need at least 1300 to have an average grade, we hope*

  [clover we are not going over your daughter]

  *it’s fine, for the right payment of course*

  [ten years to not spill the lore and to not force me to write your whole backstory about her]

  *Your fault for making it so dramatic*

  [to answer 5. The imaginary world, for my reality is currently being ruined by my own imagination thus if I remove my anchor on the imaginary world the {} I thought I could escape]

  [for 6 i am the author, the shift in personality is more related to “putting on a mask and finally taking it off”]

  [nothing will happen really, the narrator is me but in a different person, kinda hard to explain just understand that the narrator is also an actor]

  *What’s our word count now? *

  {1185 if we subtract Gpts questions}

  [115 word left before I can sleep peacefully, I might ask one more question that might alow us over the qualification]

  8. Is the “real world” actually real, or just another layer of the story?

  You mention school assignments, deadlines, hunger, and tea, but they’re spoken by the same voices discussing gods, time, and death. Is the reality Dexen speaks of truly outside the fiction, or is it another trick of the narrative—another fold in the story’s space?

  [ez real, like really real, as in I’m typing this on 11:45 pm on my phone in my bed real, well for the rest of the words I might just say random stuff]

  [oh, did hit the 1300 mark? ok I’m tired bedtime, miss #### plz grade me ok at least I’m sleepy and a little stressed]

  [now i realized that seemed a little manipulative, eh whatever]

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