Okay right now there is a little bit problem. As you guys already read from Chapter 2 until 11, I use a first person perspective to make the narration much more fun and informal. But on Chapter 11, I put another POV to make the readers understand the story better. If possible I am planning to to continue this kind of style in the future.
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But there some readers who prefers the third person perspective. And there also some readers that prefers first person. I admit that if I use the third person perspective, naturally the story will be much more easier to understood. But for me it may lack a little bit on how to show the character interact with each other.
So below is a poll, i'll decide the narration perspective with you readers vote.