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Technomancer: A Magical Girls Sidekick Volume 1 Retrospective / EDITED REUPLOAD LIVE!

  Hey everyone, big day!

  I've finished editing the first ~9 chapters of Technomancer: How I Became the Hapless Sidekick of the World’s Greatest Magical Girl and extended multiple chapters by over 1000 words with tons more planned for the first two arcs. Instead of creating a changelog and reordering everything, I've decided to do a fresh upload for the story.

  I may be incorrect with this conclusion, but I realized the fundamental issue with the first arc was that... I was in way too big of a hurry to get back to Terra. So the end result was that Ikki's Earth felt like more of a throwaway to a lot of readers that was ultimately pointless. The problem with the first two arcs ultimately wasn't just a 'pacing' issue - it was a failure to connect the worldbuilding together.

  What I should've done, instead, was use the time on Terra to flesh out both the Terran side and Earth side a lot more - since the magical girls did canonically clear the way on Earth for resettlement.

  I've improved a LOT since the second arc of Technomancer and through Volume 1 of Magical Girl Harmonia Lux. I hope that shows in this rewrite. Lux's Volume 1 has an arc or two left in it, but I figured it would be a good idea to get this done now because the worldbuilding will cross over significantly in the next two arcs.

  So please, check it out. Enjoy, and please port your ratings / reviews over to help give it a kickstart!

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